
I’m in a place
With a man or woman standing above me
They look out along the horizon
I’m on a ledge hanging underneath them
They can’t see me
My mouth is parched; I can’t shout
They can’t hear me
I want to let go
I’m so alone that the birds watch me every second
The ground looks so comfortable
But I won’t give up
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That’s the spirit. Lovely poem. Giving up is letting go!
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